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Ramona Moth's avatar

gasped at topaz thunder but it only got better as i kept reading !

Beau Watson's avatar

You ever love someone it feels like sunlight? Yeah, that’s topaz thunder 💛

thanks for your words Ramona

fitz's avatar

OH THE NERVE OF YOU WRITING THIS WHILE I CANT GET A SINGLE PRETTY WORD FROM MY BRAIN ☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️

Beau Watson's avatar

I’m the syllable snatcher

fitz's avatar

that explains so much

Helen Grover's avatar

Thematically it reminded me of Lucy Grey. I also liked the rhythm and rhyme placements.

Georgia's avatar

You, sir, are magic. WOW

lexie greene's avatar

RFTUGIHIUHO WHAT THATS SO GOOD!!! it's so...creepy? you are a fantastic poet. please never stop writing.