Beau this is AMAZING! That was a brilliant story. I loved every second of it and I wish it was longer!!! Your voice recordings are so fun, Iām really glad you add them! This story is going to stick with me š
Beautiful take on the pact trope. The way Bartherioch gets bound by rules but then slowly starts bending them out of genuine care rahter than legalistic loopholes was really well done. Reminded me of watching someone learn to be human not thru grand gestures but throuhg tiny choices over decades.
I saw someone recommend that longer posts are easier to consume if they have an audio option, so Iāve started doing that :) Iām glad you enjoyed it ā¤ļø
I am SO happy you decided to share this (yes, not -so-humble brag that I got to read this early) because it is just so so brilliant! Everything you write is just incredible. š¤
Beau this is AMAZING! That was a brilliant story. I loved every second of it and I wish it was longer!!! Your voice recordings are so fun, Iām really glad you add them! This story is going to stick with me š
this is great
Thanks for stopping by and reading it :)
WOW INCREDIBLE! iām so glad you recommended i listen because the voices added so much!
Thanks for checking it put Caroline :) doing demon voice is very fun
beau this is so beautiful! easily my favorite piece of fiction iāve read on this app. my only regret is that there wasnāt more to read!
Beautiful take on the pact trope. The way Bartherioch gets bound by rules but then slowly starts bending them out of genuine care rahter than legalistic loopholes was really well done. Reminded me of watching someone learn to be human not thru grand gestures but throuhg tiny choices over decades.
Ouch, Beau ! That was my heart :(
this is AMAZING
Thank you for reading:) Iām very happy with how it came out
Awwā¦well that was totally heartwarming. Itās great you recorded it too- well done. Love the ending
I saw someone recommend that longer posts are easier to consume if they have an audio option, so Iāve started doing that :) Iām glad you enjoyed it ā¤ļø
Delightful, Beau! Masterful storytelling.š¹
Thanks for stopping by eve :) glad you liked it
I'm not crying! YOU'RE CRYING!!
I didnāt know how it was gonna end when I started writing :(
thanks for checking it out Michelle ā¤ļø
I GOT SHIVERS????????????????? THIS IS SO SO GOOD HOW DOES IT FEEL TO WRITE SO GOOD???????
Thanks for reading fitz :) I just let the story tell itself, tbh
thank *you* for writing helppppāNOOO i need one of those devastated one dayā
I am SO happy you decided to share this (yes, not -so-humble brag that I got to read this early) because it is just so so brilliant! Everything you write is just incredible. š¤